Add a stronger thesis statement
Expand the introduction
Include more background information
Define key terms
Add more body paragraphs
Break one idea into multiple points
Use more evidence and examples
Explain each example in more detail
Add quotations from sources
Analyze the quotations thoroughly
Include counterarguments
Respond to opposing views
Add historical context
Include relevant statistics
Compare and contrast ideas
Discuss causes and effects
Add real-world applications
Include a case study
Describe the process step by step
Use transition sentences between paragraphs
Elaborate on main ideas
Add more supporting details
Ask and answer deeper questions
Expand the conclusion
Revise short sentences into fuller ones
Replace vague words with specific language
Add sensory or descriptive details where appropriate
Include additional research
Discuss implications and significance
Add a reflection or personal insight
Check if each paragraph has a clear topic sentence
