Add a clear thesis statement
Expand each main idea into its own paragraph
Include more supporting evidence
Use specific examples
Add relevant quotations
Explain how each example supports the point
Define important terms
Include background information
Compare and contrast related ideas
Address counterarguments
Add transitions between ideas
Break complex points into smaller parts
Use topic sentences for every paragraph
Add historical or contextual details
Discuss causes and effects
Include statistics or data
Analyze the significance of evidence
Restate ideas in different words where appropriate
Add more depth to the introduction
Add more depth to the conclusion
Answer who, what, when, where, why, and how
Revise short paragraphs into fuller ones
Combine related points into expanded sections
Include additional sources
Elaborate on key claims
Use more precise and varied vocabulary
Check for places where more explanation is needed
Add examples from different perspectives
Include implications or consequences
Discuss limitations or exceptions
Reflect on broader themes
Make sure every claim is fully developed